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All Comments on 'Tides of Change'

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HarryHillHarryHillabout 11 years ago

Some good stuff in there

freakyfreaky469freakyfreaky469about 11 years ago

I really like the imagery of the paper boats at the end. The use of entropy throughout feels almost as though the whole piece is being pulled into chaos. Liked it!

Ashesh9Ashesh9about 11 years ago
The Pull of your Poem

Is highly rated by the Physics of my Universe !

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