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Beautiful, just so beautiful

Thank you, Bobbi xxx

Thought provoking with beautiful flow. Pardon me for highlighting a few verses/part of a stanza that resonates for me in a way possibly inconsistent with the closing message of your poem (or maybe not). Some 16 plus years ago very strong winds toppled some large trees in our woods — they embraced the land. Today, there is but bare remnants of the trees, all but swept away. Yet, the trees and the land are now one together forever/timeless.

carving away both trees and land

as they fall into their embrace

pounded and twisted

until all is swept away.

thank you Tazz x

Thank you, Migbird, for your lovely prose poem - so glad to have been the cause of it xxxxx

This beautiful poem is quite lyrical; I feel and hear the lovely phrasing and images of optimism and romance.

Thank you so much, Paul, I really appreciate that xx

You have a gift for writing, whether it be stories or poems. Thank you for sharing this with us.

OneAuthor, thank you so much xxxxx

I want to turn the whole thing upside down

I'll find the things they say just can't be found

I'll share this love I find with everyone

We'll sing and dance to Mother Nature's songs

I don't want this feeling to go away

Who's to say

I can't do everything

Well I can try

And as I roll along I begin to find

Things aren't always just what they seem

Cheryle, darling, I am honoured xxxxx

Time is an illusion. There is only now.