All Comments on 'To Keep Me Falling Apart'

I kept trying to interject a "from" in your title, but wow, the illness metaphor adds an intensity to this poem that had me trembling with your final lines. Yes, with that last stanza, I saw where you were going. Your nicely crafted metaphor made me suddenly feel "it" when I read the ending. Excellent poetry...

jim : )

I felt the weight of the world reading this.

Very well done

this one really touched me today Very powerful. I could only read it twice to save the tears