All Comments on 'to let go'

Damn! What lovely imagery. Someday, perhaps, I'll learn as well. ~Imp

You will always be the gold coin

shining in the dust of my memories.

quite loverly...thanks...blue

I loved this bit:

"You will always be the gold coin

shining in the dust of my memories.

I find you in myself,

even when you belong to someone else..."

Beautifully nostalgic.

pelicans in the desert was a high point for me but this stanza I soaked in ...

You will always be the gold coin

shining in the dust of my memories.

I find you in myself,

even when you belong to someone else...

very very good poem,

paramount poetry~

so beautifully worded. Great imaginary and flowed wonderfully.

Be careful of punctuation and those "your" words that seems to sneak up on us now and then.

Your in my hollow footsteps -You're (example)

It didn't bother me or cause problems with the flow, but wanted to let you know :)

Thanks for sharing your talent!

Vivid imagery and deep meaning throughout. Especially in this part,

"You will always be the gold coin

shining in the dust of my memories.

I find you in myself,

even when you belong to someone else..."

lovely throughout and a couple of images really hit me in regards to life's difficult lessons and finally have come to a point where its been there long enough. one is able to let it go and it feels good that it has happened. that is my take. i wish i had gotten to it sooner. but things have been hectic lately........super job sabina!!...don

that is wonderful throughout. certain lines hit me as if to say that life has difficult lessons. through that, it becomes clear to one that on can let go. it feels good when it gets to this point. i wish i had gotten to it sooner. but have had a couple hectic days....super job sabina!!....don

5 for my blunder........damn...i hate it when i do that.

a subject near and dear to me.

I can empathize with so many of these feelings, and you presented them in some very unique and fresh ways.

In my opinion the best line is the last

~ I have finally learned to flow around the rocks~

It sums up the journey and shows growth, acceptance, and wisdom.

A very " deep" poem that is also a beautiful read

Thank you