All Comments on 'To Make Her Pleasure Mine'

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With your Domme writ;

A small suggestion on these lines:

"Mistress guides me to be bold,

And casts my fears away."

While the wording seems to say that Mistress casts the fears away, dropping the 's' has a more actively submissive tone by Mistress have Her sub cast fears away, like this:

"Mistress guides me to be bold,

And cast my fears away."

Just a suggestion.