All Comments on 'Tortured Soul 3'

is something many of us have felt and had to deal with. One suggestion. Offer your readers a little more. Give us an idea about what's torturing your soul. I know you have a story you want to share, but this poem is too abstract. What is the pain? What is the desire? I want something concrete. Describe an incident, a person in your life, sights, sounds, etc.