All Comments on 'Touch of Desire'

There's a good conversational tone in this piece that allows me to excuse the repeated phrasing. You seem to want to make a mirror of this poem but fall a little short in the last line. Check for the typo, of the extra "to" in there. A solid poem. Thanks for sharing.

and I think I understood most, especially the desire to touch those who you get. Thanks for the courage to be simple (but not simplistic), no masks needed.