by Randi Grail
Thanks for taking us on a whirlwind tour of your mind, Randi! Wonderful images and phrasing.
Q: Aqua Vera? Is this a deliberate concoction? Or did you mean Aqua Vita (water of life), or Aqua Verita (water of truth)? What is your intent?
Lots to savor in this poem. Thanks so much for sharing it.
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excellent poem
i really like the feel of it
wonderful rhythm to your word choices