All Comments on 'True Love'

Can I play?? Yes, let me play! Loved this :-)

The love a man and woman have, when together they are wed

Goes so much farther, than just the honey moon bed

Falling out of love isn't possible, if it was true love from the start

When you love someone more than yourself, you can't break their heart

Your love will last forever, and you can not deny

When one is hurt from sorrow, the other will also cry

You may have misunderstandings, you may even start to separate

You'll say I'm leaving for good, but you will always hesitate

You can not take such feelings, and toss them to the side

Love is not a game you play, true feelings you can not hide

Love for each other, even death can't take away

One will be left with memories, they'll meet again someday

When men and women separate, true love was never there

They married for lust and pleasure, for each other they did not care

Love is such a precious thing, make sure whatever you do

Stop and think about it, before you say, I LOVE YOU

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The love

a man and woman have

When together they are wed,

Goes so much farther

Than just the honey moon

In bed.

Falling out of love

Can not be possible,

If it's true love

From the start.

When you love someone

More than self,

You can't break

Each other's heart.

Your love

Will last forever,

And this, you can't deny.

When one is hurt

From sorrow,

The other

Will also cry.

You may have

Misunderstandings;

Even start to separate.

You might say,

"I'm gone for good"

But then

Always hesitate.

You can not

Take these feelings,

And toss them

To the side.

Love is not

A game we play,

True feelings

Are hard to hide.

Love for one another;

Even death

Can't take away.

One is left with memories,

And they'll

Meet again

Someday.

When men and women separate,

True love

Was never there.

They married

For lust and pleasure,

In which

Is obvious

That love was never there.

Love is more

A precious thing;

So, be sure

In what you do.

You shouldn't have to think

Before you say,

That sweet

"Love you".

Ah! I played with the words, style and the flow. I couldn't help myself. Loved those rhymes :)

I see you met the grammar police...

I can see someone handing her a Ernest Hemingway novel and her edit it. Some peolpe have to change things...others are able to except your literary Art as you created it...

and it was most certainly a beautiful poem. (~_*)

I loved this one. It tells the real feelings and does have a wonderful flow.. It is all in your Explicit words, tellin their tale.. Bravo I say~~ Do another , and let them all play.. *Smiles*

I really did like this, sounds like it's from the heart and truly meant..

LilDarlin~~

yours is excellent, i like your version better. love this and look forward to more great reads