All Comments on 'Tumbling'

Nice progression and crisp lines. I particularly liked:

"from becoming penetrating stares."

It sticks out for me (lol-not an intentional pun) it is powerful in it's context and speaks to the sexuality of the poem.

Blistering, ICM! The passion here sizzles, but I think you overwork some of the images a bit ("bodies slam together", etc.). A wonderful read from a talented poet!