All Comments on 'Turned Out By A Muse'

by Sinsualmind

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tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
This....

...is good stuff, and you are certainly a fine addition here. Keep posting!

flyguy69flyguy69almost 20 years ago
Mm mm mm....

Definitely not cool. Beautifully phrased, wonderfully explicit, scorchingly hot! Great work, sinsualmind!

SinsualmindSinsualmindalmost 20 years agoAuthor
thanks!!

Thanks Tara and Flyguy! Your words are humbling and I truly appreciate the feedback :)

DeepAsleepDeepAsleepalmost 20 years ago
Holy..

..raging boner, Batman!

I really liked the rhythm of this.

And how you said he put his tongue in your ass, because it's just this side of dirty and always makes me grin.

I'd like to read more of these.

~D.A.

lostandfounderlostandfounderalmost 20 years ago
so cool it burns

no holding back in this one. very sexual and very intelligent at the same time. Great F'ing poem.

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