by Sinsualmind
no holding back in this one. very sexual and very intelligent at the same time. Great F'ing poem.
..raging boner, Batman!
I really liked the rhythm of this.
And how you said he put his tongue in your ass, because it's just this side of dirty and always makes me grin.
I'd like to read more of these.
~D.A.
Thanks Tara and Flyguy! Your words are humbling and I truly appreciate the feedback :)
Definitely not cool. Beautifully phrased, wonderfully explicit, scorchingly hot! Great work, sinsualmind!
...is good stuff, and you are certainly a fine addition here. Keep posting!