All Comments on ''Twas the Night Before XXXmas'

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legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesover 3 years ago
Five stars but who let the cock out?

Who had the key for the dick in the cage? If it were still locked h & w couldn't engage. Was there a way the marrieds could fuck? Did wife have the key or were they so stuck? Maybe Dom drove just round the block and returned to the house to open the lock. His gift for Christmas was opening the lock so wifey could suck poor hubby's cock. Dom then left and went on his way leaving the couple to cuddle and play. If you can think of a different way, comment here to have your say!

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 3 years ago

Congratulations! This is a thoroughly enjoyable five star poem! Merry Christmas to all, and to all a good night. Happy New Year, too, and let's hope 2021 is not such a fright! ~~ Your favorite slut appreciator

davebccanadadavebccanadaover 3 years ago
Excellent

You copy the style so closely and even the timbre. Lovely adaptation, thanks for the read, 'twas a sheer delight.

BillyWildBillyWild5 months ago

Very well done and super clever. I'm going to share this with friends.

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