All Comments on 'Two Sisters'

I really like the eye-rhyme you use, love and prove, rather than force a cliché or yoda speak to make something else work. I stumbled in L11, check your syntax, the abrupt sentence segment subject switch is awkward. Another good sonnet from the guy who's rapidly becoming the pobo's bard. Thanks for sharing.

Yet another sweet piece from Lit's newest sonnet machine, with sisters that are the light of Daddy's life. {But one sonnet a day for thirty days? Good luck.}