All Comments on 'Un-happily Ever After'

by RiverMaya

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Oh Maya!

Warmest of hugs. This is so sad and too familiar. Why do woman put up with this? Heartbreaking, beautifully written! 5☆

PickFictionPickFictionalmost 3 years ago

Sad and inexcusable but so well presented, as always.

chastenchastenalmost 3 years ago

Not sure why someone thinks only women who put up with this, but I agree it's heartbreaking.

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowalmost 3 years ago

Another thoughtful poem that directly hit my heart, and made me stop, sit and think.

OneAuthorOneAuthoralmost 3 years ago

As always, your words capture the feelings in such a powerful way.

NewOldGuy77NewOldGuy77almost 3 years ago

You perfectly described my parents’ relationship. Years after the divorce, despite everything he’d done, she still wanted him back.

Paul4playPaul4playalmost 3 years ago

Your final line captures the complex emotional burden....

“The comfort of mistrust and the solace of shame.”

Powerful....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Excellent

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July 15, 2023 My poem is in the latest issue of Spirit Fire Review: https://www.spiritfirereview.com/post/new-issue-of-spirit-fire-review-1