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RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Great Catch ~

I love the feelings you paint here.

It comes pouring out in a song

like voice, with feelings~unsent.

Just great imagery and wording.

I would have did a lil

with the caps, just me.

Welcome to Lit.

I think you have, a lot of potential

and very much look forward

to more poetry ... from you !!

* Smiles*

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