All Comments on 'undeserving of a title#1'

DoubleD, I especially like the "steam-powered juggernaut

devouring cityscapes." I did find the extra spaces in the second and third lines a bit disconcerting, but I got over it quickly.

i understand my own challenge of titling my stuff...but this does just fine on its own, without a catchy title. but actually, undeserving #1 is rather catchy. great work, 2d.

curt

Oh, I don't know. Maybe titleless #1. It's certainly deserving with its unique and creative style.

I'd call it too much fun, but you can't have too much fun.