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by KazeNoSasayaki

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avengilineavengilineover 7 years ago
So your username is badass...

and your poetry is too!

I think a lot of people are going to end up googling it and reading it twice.... I have to ask...what exactly were you feeling when you wrote this? I feel like I need more background.

KazeNoSasayakiKazeNoSasayakiover 7 years agoAuthor
Thank you

I'm sure a lot of people will have to translate it but it sounds a lot more...exotic than the translation.

I was thinking about how someone made me feel when we were together and how everything else lost its luster when we were apart. About how those moments before we parted were tragic and saddening and how I knew I'd be consumed by the time we'd spent together before.

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