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wildsweetonewildsweetoneabout 17 years ago
Poetry Forum

i mentioned this poem in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum - wildsweetone

darkerdreamerdarkerdreamerabout 17 years ago
I get

that the huge cage is symbolic of the sheer amount of sorrow and pain, but it seems like a lot of space for the demon to roam. A small cage would make him want to run (a smaller cage with a thousand bars?). I like the style of this poem, but the metaphor leaves me wondering.

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