All Comments on 'Upon Understanding One Thought'

I'm of two minds on this, with the second half of the poem displaying car/thought // city/mind. On the one hand, I would have preferred it to have been kept clean with references only to thoughts and mind and not using the slashes. On the other had, as presented, it does wonderfully support that line about how fucked up your mind really is. Interesting style.

This poem was mentioned in Sunday's New Poems Reviews.

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