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by pelegrino

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UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellover 10 years ago
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I like you near rhyme as well as the obvious ones, did stumble a bit on the 2nd line of the 4th stanza where you have plural 'poses' and singular 'place'. Thanks for the read

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