All Comments on 'Vibes'

Interesting. I like it. I read it earlier and couldn't think of a nifty comment. So, I gave up and just decided to say I like it. :)

clever phrasing, interesting twists, but in my opinion too much of a good thing... I found myself putting it into sing song rhythm, which to me, took away from the darker meaning.... but I could be way off, would not be the first time :)

The light veneer of

Rhythm & rhyme

Serves all the more to highlight the

Darkness underneath.