All Comments on 'Waiting'

A great first poem, I liked how it shows how easy it is for everyday chores to get in the way of romance, life does get in the way sometimes which is why relationships need lots of work and attention to keep them strong, it is too easy to just give up.

A enlightening read,

Well Done!

~ J

...but it's a pity you left some mistakes -

Children, jobs, other obligations.

When did we loose ourselves,

into time an other people

which mar an otherwise terrific effort. It's always a good idea to read through a "finished" poem one last time - aloud if possible - to catch th mistakes Spell Check misses.

Tess

was cleverly wonderful

at how relationships can often take a backseat to the daily grind of life.

It hard to make everything come together love work kids life great poem hon

kisses

chez