All Comments on 'Wall of sugar'

by peach77

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lorencinolorencinoover 14 years ago
You continue to delight

In a few deft strokes (sorry but the cliché is most appropriate here) you paint a clear picture of the compensatory behaviour of the insecure that is so familiar in our world. For some reason the poem elicits compassion for the person behind the voice of the poem.

EroticOrogenyEroticOrogenyover 14 years ago
Bittersweet sugar

And all too true for too many

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 14 years ago
^

Nicely done wall.

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