All Comments on 'Wanna Bubble Bath?'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Now here's a vision

Of water and suds

That'll keep you clean

No matter how dirty the scene...

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Waxing Poetic!

A beautiful set of verses centering on the delights of taking a bubble bath. Very lyrical and refreshing!

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
bubble bath?

I have rubber duckies (2) and a bunch of 'decoys' <grin think I have been inspired to take a bubble bath tonight <grin

"Pink bear claw tub

lit by candles glowing

dripping wax into puddles."

nice write!

Velvet_PollyVelvet_Pollyover 17 years ago
why?

do mere decriptions pass for poetry on this site?

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