All Comments on 'Was it truly love?'

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
awwww

heck of a poem L~

cute and endearing~

golly what a world we live in with

computer sex in the play...more broken

hearts that really mega bytes...hehehe

great poem

normal jeannormal jeanover 19 years ago
poems like this one

make me question the validity of the word love when used in internet context at all. Anonymity is a crutch for people who cannot deal with their own lives, I hate to see people hurt, it sucks...keep writing it will help. and remember, it is NOT you, *some* of the people on the net dont care, so do not blame yourself, please dont ever blame yourself :)

postobitumpostobitumover 19 years ago
Good

effort - I appreciate the depth of emotion, even in the internet context. There are a couple of typos that detract a tiny bit, otherwise it's a nice poem. Keep up the good work!

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