All Comments on 'Water'

I liked this.

It had a momentum in the writing that led me on to the inevitable conclusion.

I liked also the way the form of the poem matched the content - short sentences at the start, building to match the increasing passion at the end.

All tell, no show!

like for the longer reads...but ...I love anything with the title water and the content was well worth the read...very intersting and it held my attention...ty/bluerain