by Kundalinguini
The desert stirs the emotions in many, I gotta say this one made recollections. Thanks for a great read.
This is just lovely.
that hidden ebb and flow of tides
that reach so deep they slip between
the sands time left behind,
Your mind works in fascinating ways. Makes me wonder if Yosemite remembers the caress of glaciers.
Graceful images, I fell in love with the first two lines...well done.
~Merry
I've often looked at sand dunes and thought exactly this!
Nicely done - 5.
Thank you for such a well written poem. Many times I've sat on the beach and wondered. You've touched my thoughts. Thanks