All Comments on 'Waves in the Sand'

by Kundalinguini

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Lord DragonsWingLord DragonsWingalmost 20 years ago
Brought back memories

Thank you for such a well written poem. Many times I've sat on the beach and wondered. You've touched my thoughts. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Oh! I loved this!

I've often looked at sand dunes and thought exactly this!

Nicely done - 5.

MerrymakerMerrymakeralmost 20 years ago
Sandy dreams

Graceful images, I fell in love with the first two lines...well done.

~Merry

echoes_sechoes_salmost 20 years ago
Haunted memories

and deep reflections comes from desert sands. Thank you.

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
Brilliant

This is just lovely.

that hidden ebb and flow of tides

that reach so deep they slip between

the sands time left behind,

Your mind works in fascinating ways. Makes me wonder if Yosemite remembers the caress of glaciers.

My Erotic TailMy Erotic Tailalmost 20 years ago
Poetic place

The desert stirs the emotions in many, I gotta say this one made recollections. Thanks for a great read.

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
Great stuff

I liked this a lot

Thank you

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