All Comments on 'weeping willow'

long lovely branches finger braid

played out in plaid planching passions

woven to the weft of she and he and him

switch witch lash on tender skin

we seldom see the pain within

the word willow is a passion all its own

begining with a kiss and ending in swallows

it takes trust to embrace a brace of sorrows

stript scripts of sinews and forgotten tomorrows

thank you for sharing your beautiful words with me.

azulie

normally I dont care much for such short lines, but you handled these very well. Also your choice of off rhyme is very subtle and effective and shows an appreciation for the intelligence of your audience ( in IMO). Your description stripping the branch was vivid, yet almost hypnotic.

I have to steal a comment from the previous person, " that was beautiful."

enjoyed very much :)

maria