All Comments on 'Wetter Lust'

by littlemissjen

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writedoctorwritedoctoralmost 15 years ago
Emotional

Words on my screen, simple yet powerful.

The man expels, her soul is liquid like honey.

Soft fingertips on the keyboard an extension

of deep, passionate feelings......I see her.

Absorbed with inner pleasure that men desire.

This man.

lance gtlance gtalmost 15 years ago
Well said

As much as the poem speaks to me, I enjoy the emphasis of thoughts that writedoctor returns. Lance

HubeeHubeealmost 15 years ago
Counterpoint

I love the way your poems show a 'softer' side to your submissiveness.

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