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twelveoonetwelveooneover 13 years ago
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looks like you are advertising

Look up Rule of three: Rule of Seven

vrosej10vrosej10over 13 years ago
Well written

But too long for my tastes. I feel like it could have been said better in half the length.

Esperanza_HidalgoEsperanza_Hidalgoover 13 years ago
I like

this poem, but do think it may be a bit long. The personal experience is something I enjoy reading.

EH

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