by blin18
Your brain child has grown into a beautiful poem! I'm sharing it in the New Poem Recommendations on the forums as I'd hate for any of the other poets to miss it.
is like training the dear to make rhyme. TK U MLJ LV NV
Wow. What a great narrative poem. Exceptional in ever way. So subtle and so marvelous.
Thanks Belinda. I always look forward to anything new from your wonderfully creaative mind. The images were very cler and sweet to contemplate. As is always the case from you.
Thanks again,
Terry
Thank you, so much, for asking me to work on this with you. It was a treat to work with your words and this lovely narrative.
This is just simply delightful. If more poetry writing was written in this way, more would be reading poetry.
For whatever reason, my comment is posted as anonymous, but my login is greenmountaineer.
Lovely poem, such a vivid rendition - most poems I read as a moment, suspended in time. Your poem almost whispers its story - so quiet, touching. I now need to read the story.
Thank you, Trix and AMB, for drawing attention to it.