All Comments on 'What is Under the Skirt?'

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WickedEveWickedEveover 17 years ago
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The ending is the poem's strength. I'd drop "what is under the skirt!" The last two lines work fine on their own.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
What a neat little poem..

but seeing as you are asking: Light lemon Thong, bald with no piercings.

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