All Comments on 'What She Thought'

i'd say a guy wrote this, because it's lacking feminine detail and females are known for detail. There's some potential in a couple lines, but there's also some really terrible lines. The end rhyme in the beginning doesn't work, the eye rhyme doesn't work. I find it pleasurable to see poets develop, I hope you work hard and post some super erotic group of lines that's wholly you and doesn't resemble 'I gave a guy a woodie.' best of luck.

and wanting to feel. TK U MLJ LV NV