All Comments on 'What You'll Never Know'

A really good first submission,

a couple of spelling errors

but on the whole a very

enjoyable and well worded

piece.

thanks.

~ J

how it is to not be able to openly express your feelings. Very nice first submission.

I wrote this a long long time ago. At one point I did divulge my feelings, and he shared those feelings. We made some plans, but then were told it wasn't the best idea, so we just... didn't follow our hearts. We both 'moved on' but didn't really... we last saw each other in 2008. In 2009, he took his own life. Not over me, at least that's not what I was told. I didn't find out until 2019, because, well, we had moved on. I hadn't bothered him, merely checked in digitally t osee what he was up to. When I couldn't find him, I found his dad, and found that he was gone. I never stopped loving him. But now I guess I have to.