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by spacemunky

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tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
IT IS WELL KNOWN

you cant please everyone, just yourself. TK U MLJ LV NV

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureover 12 years ago
Ooops.

I commemted on you last poem first but my thoughts are the same for this work too. I think you should read more of other writers poetry and try re-writing them both. Nice try though.

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