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dhyvdabout 15 years agoI liked it...
I like it,
but would have loved it with some more punctuation and single spacing/paragraphs, to emphasize where the meaning boundaries were.
Well, that sounds nit-picking but I think it's still important... so don't feel bad or anything; I really did like it!
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