All Comments on 'When I first told her about you'

i mentioned this poem in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. please feel free to come along and join in with other poets. the 50% temperature rating i've given you is so that it does not affect future temp ratings. - wildsweetone.

Well, I love it. It's different, which is exciting. From one line to the next, I have no idea where the poem is going, but I want it take me to the end. Good job!

and intriguing. I found it a little hard to follow but it's worth the effort.

Tess

Loved the erotic film noir scene and the slyness of the dialog spiked the poem's intensity for me. Thanks, good poem.

You caught my attention from the title to the end. Kept me hanging like a kite, wishing for more air ... love it my friend. Very edgy and yes ... thrilling. More please ~~!!!