All Comments on 'Winter's Fast Approaching, My Dear'

Thank you for sharing - I do enjoy this.

are fleeting and cold. TK U MLJ LV NV

Still, this feels like a warm way confronting the fact

Astute observation, demure.

but some bad lines as well i.e. "on your nakedness to have and to hold" with great content but poor construction. Likewise, " as there's heat in my skin, my Dear,"

where subject matter is poor and "my Dear" is unneeded. and who lies naked in the cold? or is the subject deceased? None the less a good effort.