All Comments on 'Without You Now'

by Wanton Vixxxen

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TathagataTathagataabout 20 years ago
Tis

not an easy thing to lose a pet, or a Master/ Mistress.

my heart goes out to you.

and I hope these times of heartache pass quickly

thank you for showing another side of yourself to us

Be Well

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Sadness

and pain is felt here in this piece on loss. Well done...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Incredibly insightful my love

Knowing the depth of your emotions, as well as the intensity of this relationship, I can only say Vixx, that you truly have a cherished heart of gold. Any man worth his salt, would find you to be a precious gem, a treasure to be valued, loved, and adored. Anyone who wouldn't acknowledge that, or appreciate it, doesn't know what they had...or lost.

You truly are one amazing woman my friend. One very amazing woman my sultry tart.

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 20 years ago
This is

very well written! I love :

Free now of restraints; your marriage plays

the song of ten years? devotion

Thanks!

quietpolyquietpolyalmost 20 years ago
i like this a lot

I like poems where the emotion is clear. This poem is such. Nicely done.

EarthSeaSkyEarthSeaSkyover 19 years ago
I heard a cry

...from a voice unknown. "Poignant."

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 19 years ago
Such Depth

Pain portrayed that only

those who've lived can feel

and know and in knowing

be seen

CaPic267CaPic267about 18 years ago
Another good one

Here's another piece I can identify with, the only difference being that he didn't leave me--I passed on him and only now do I feel the loss of being without him now! CP

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