All Comments on 'Wow and Flutter'

by Minervous

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steve portersteve porterover 16 years ago
It's nice,

genuine, and heartfelt. Smile, you're on carnal camera. Steve.

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 16 years ago
Play it again!

I loved this short prose. It seems that the poetry section is now the proud host of poems and every thing else which isn't traditional fiction. Hurray!

Maria2394Maria2394over 16 years ago
wow :)

all I have to say is your line breaks are soooo good. enjoyed the read :)

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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Major step up from the usual attempted cookie cutter erotic flailings. She's in a class all her own.

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