All Comments on 'Wow and Flutter'

Major step up from the usual attempted cookie cutter erotic flailings. She's in a class all her own.

all I have to say is your line breaks are soooo good. enjoyed the read :)

I loved this short prose. It seems that the poetry section is now the proud host of poems and every thing else which isn't traditional fiction. Hurray!

genuine, and heartfelt. Smile, you're on carnal camera. Steve.