All Comments on 'yellow'

woman, I really like the depth of your metaphor.

this is poetry.

Although I don't think a peach is particularly yellow, I liked where you were going with this one. Keep writing. Sometimes these short, sweet, simple poems are riveting. You have that capability. Now just smooth out the edges.

depending upon the variety and there are many and in fact, there are white peaches too!

this is a very complex poem, not in anything physical, but on a much deeper level. I see it as a message of hope and willingnes to let go, very good :)

saving the best for last.. or are the softer bruised spots the sweetest? nice metaphor!

to accept the bad first, to get it out of sight, This is much more complex that it first appears

I just like it. That's it. I like it.