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by Deprived_in_AZ

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twelveoonetwelveooneover 11 years ago
I guess, it is my job

to tell you, the first two lines are total cliches, well technically the first isn't, however,

a bad way to start

Hot flashes and cold shivers

Emotions running wild

i didn't vote

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
WILL THE NEXT CLIMAXAL TRYST

be as profound for out souls, TK U MLJ LV NV

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