All Comments on 'You Came'

excellent literary Art, a deep and open poem, like a ... hole lot of your witty write instilled, <grin> pearl of a poem, Alex

It alot. Loved the picture

and the flow of your words,

A fantastic first attempt

at illustrated poetry.

More pls.

~ J

An illustrated triolet. Both words and picture, perfect.

Tess

The triolet is simply worded but very effective--I particularly like the consent/innocence combination--and the photo is wonderful. Well done!

The poem alone would not have been as appealing for me. But paired with the illustration, it works quite nicely.

this was better than best, Alex. Your combination of basic black shadow imagery backgrounding the simplistic; yet eloquent style of the triolet set the mood for a beautiful flow of verse. This was just lovely!

Vixxx

Deep, powerful and heartfelt. The triolet only made the lines stronger. The dark background helped convey the meaning.

with a very appropriate picture that makes it even stronger

Unexpectedly powerful for a triolet thanks to the background imagery.

You have a good touch. I can understand why you aren't writing more poetry. Me neither :-(