All Comments on 'You Kissed Her'

by LadyAmethyst

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Ashesh9Ashesh9almost 4 years ago
There'$ a startling twist.......

In the last 3 lines????!!!!

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowalmost 4 years ago

A real roller-coaster of emotions, pride, passion, love, jealousy and commiseration, more I don't even have a name for. A secret magic what the touch of those small strips of soft skin can cause, in those partaking, and in those watching. Grand artistry to wrap it all up within a hundred words.

And yes, what a twist in the end - makes me smile for long moments

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Long time lover of erotic fiction and poetry. Very drawn to dom/sub dynamics. A true switch, enjoy top or bottom equally and very able to change roles within a scene. Also enjoy vanilla moments within a kink experience or relationship. Everything always with consent. No honor...