by InMyHandsAudio
There are no words to describe how absolutely INCREDIBLE this poem is.
Kudos, Mr. Wolf. Very much kudos.
I love the emotion in this. The passion that you portray in your words.. It's not just the physical connection, although that is an important factor, it's the deep, emotional connection that you feel with your lover. I read it slow and with pause, speakeasy.
You really should edit and spell check your work before posting! Nice attempt anyway 👍
I love the sense of romance and intimacy combined with the edgy realism. Nicely composed. Lorraine.
I listened to your audio version also. The way you read really brings the moment in the poem to life. Nice voice too.
Oh how my heart races ❤ you did well in this one!! Your writing is superb and flowed rather nicely. But what I loved most was your emotion and the way you slowed or stopped to give things feeling or meaning. Plus the way your voice raised or lowered really put your feelings into what you were saying. You had me hanging on every word 😍 and the long pause at the end?? Perfect ❤
You really are in love! Seems your spirit is suited for it good for you!
Words can caress the mind as fingers can caress the skin. You prove that with this poem. Beautifully written for the mind and spirit.
Hi Everyone. I love all the love I have received on Literotica. It has and will continue to be amazing as I post new audios.
I will be moving all my older posts to my achieve page on Patreon.
Hope to see you there
Ben
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