by Sir_Nathan
I love how your stories and this poem give life to the power that a woman feels from pleasing
The structure of this poem lends a hard hitting drive that matches the experience being described. Very appropriate. Good choice in very short sentences, and the repetitive opening words pile momentum higher with each line.
A most pleasant early mornig read. Kicked my sleepy imagination into overdrive. i do enjoy Your work.....enigma
yes I know what I do, to my own sir ;) I love your poems Sir Nathan, really and truly