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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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Your poem has been mentioned in the Sunday reviews.

du lac~

Scott N. LeavittScott N. Leavittover 18 years ago
**5**

An other great ZMP!!! Thank you so much for written them all ZMA!!!

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Speachless ~

I saw this on the thread, and here again it takes my breathe ~ Just a powerful write and so emotional!!

Grabbs your heart and just stopps ...

feeling beats echooooing. Love the imagery, sadness too. Just a wonderful, breath taking ride ...

Art, this is one of those that one wants to read over and over. Just classic writing/poetry at its best, if you ask me !

*Smiles*

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
my input....

has hovered like an eagle over this, and here are my highlights of choice:

stained by age

and by death

survival justifies its right.

and -

zero visibility without a sun

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just some rambling here. sometimes zero visibility is a good thing, it can make one use instincts better. sounds good anyway.......nicely done art.......don

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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With night's vision

comes night's wisdom;

and once again,

well done...

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
BREATH..LESS

IN THE SOUTH..

another wonderful

addition to that

of your zmp files,

I shall return,

with wings,

to read again...

*****

-sGp-

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